The short story series Goandria: The Schism tells the tale of two wizards, Lorkai and Evera, as they make their way to the northern regions of the world to save seventeen captive comrades. In this series, Goandria is a much different world than I had originally envisioned, featured in the up-coming full-length novel series. The Schism takes place several millennia before the main events of the novels. It sets up the events to come, but it was a story I never really intended to write. It is a time period when demons, known as worlox, rule Goandria, and most of the people have been eradicated or enslaved except for the wizard order.
As a result of worlox oppression, the wizards have been waging war upon the demons for generations. The war has gone on for so long that none remember when there was no war. Since the wizards at this time make up the majority of the population, let’s talk about them and their powers.
To continue my theme of breaking from the norms in fantasy and still presenting something familiar, I wanted to make the wizards of Goandria blessed with a special gift and held accountable for its usage. Wizards in Goandria are not gods among men. Yes, they have powers other people could only dream of, but they have their limits. One of the biggest turn-offs for me with the Harry Potter series is that there are no defined limitations on magic. As far as I can understand, Harry Potter magic is limited only by the user’s innate abilities, and that still doesn’t limit the user because a witch or wizard can become more powerful. Essentially, how I understand Harry Potter, the world could potentially end up with bunch of mini-gods running around. Note: this is not to say I dislike Harry Potter, just that this is something I have observed with the series and I don’t care for this element personally. I actually enjoy the overall story of Harry Potter.
So what is my response? How do I create a wizard order that has limits and cannot become demi-gods? In the Goandria series, the wizards are bestowed with their magical gifts at birth by the creator, Voshnore. Similar to other series, wizards need to be trained. In Goandria, they go to the temples to learn. Some wizards live at the temples during their training, while others live with their families (similar to college, but for all ages). Magic must only be used by the wizards as a way to help others, or to help themselves under extreme circumstances. The magic Voshnore has blessed the wizards with cannot be used for selfish means, such as for doing chores or for evil. Since Voshnore chooses those who can handle the gift, he will also take it away when it is misused.
While I hint at this in The Schism, the main point of that story is to give a background to a prominent character in my upcoming novel series. The wizard system of magic is flushed out in more detail in there. In The Schism, I aim to show another side of the wizards, where they are more political and self-righteous.
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